I saw this hoping the plot would expand more, but it didn't. I don't care about the erotic value. This is bad writing. For a title that says "A Girl's Perspective" a person with an OUNCE of taste would expect a REAL female to be apart of the directing. Not just some dude. This really should've been called "A perverted man INSIDE of a girl's perspective" because really, that's who's perspective it really was lol. I'm still left wondering if this is a man that one day (for whatever reason) turned female or if he switched bodies with a women or if he just sences what the women sences, but isn't really in possession of her body. There's so much more that could've been explored with this concept like who this guy inside of the girl (and who the girl) is. Who are the people around them? Where are they? What's even going on and why? The social and individual nuances of being a women, the real issues women deal with, like what happened on the train station... in PUBLIC by the way. Not a single care about risking being in danger, transmitted infections, deseases, pregnancy...) I really don't want people to fetishize this false portrayal of the female experiance.

The animation's great and all, I'm just surprised that the prostitute not being engaged AT ALL with the man and more engaged with the money and whoever she's texting, went over lots of people's heads. It would've been interesting if we understood the prostitute as an individual more and just dive into her point of view even during this interaction. Not just the man's point of view. I don't know about y'all, but if the women isn't interested in the act, then I'm not interested. There just has to be genuine connection, chemistry, and intimacy. Plain and simple. The man still partaking in this souless intimate act and not at all having any standards, values, and self worth I think represents a lot of the audiance. The man is not at all concerned about the women or the fact that he's being used as a money tool. PMO and sex addiction IS REAL and it's easy to not at all think critically about life or anything, just busting is all you need to fill the void and cover up whatever pain you're really dealing with... I really hope people are more aware about the distortion of this intimate act as represented in this animation.

I was hoping this time there would be a twist against the whole "everybody bangs everybody no matter how ridiculous" trope. Rinta could’ve refused the implied offer since he’s more responsible and mature. He should also be able to tell if he’s being used and taken advantage of. That would’ve really made this plot interesting to me…

Update - That's fair. I just don't think that always has to be forced to maintain the plot. There's a time and place for everything. You know?

I'm sorry but this is just a poorly put together mini game. There isn't even a prize you could win. It just shows you a useless score.

The flight attendant belongs to the streets. Everyone here me out. What are the odds of a flight attendant (that doesn't know you at all) sucking you off DURING FLIGHT SERVICE? Hmm? You guys are 2 complete strangers. Kinda strange how there was no refuse option because realistically, I would've wiped my own damn pants! Look forward to the rest of the game I guess... Also, the gif below the screen is still distracting.

I get that this is NSFW, but why can't you guys just appreciate other aspects of this game like the programming, story, concept, art, soundtrack, in depth dialogue, and characters? There are plenty of other qualities to like than just how soon you get to sex. Speaking of, It's unfortunate that after maxing out Amelia's hearts, there's just no other way to interact with her other than... well... you know. Despite this whole concept lacking originality, still not too bad, there's just a lot missing. The gif below the screen is pretty distracting.

The DS sound font really serves the concept.

Was definitely looking forward to this. When I saw the Shotgun leg animatic, I was suprised you were the one that composed the music. Spotify perhaps? Thanks For Sharing

I just want to let you know that you don't have to feel sorry for a single critics unsatisfaction. How YOU feel about your craft is what matters most and shouldn't be altered simply be ones critique (unless it's advice for any form of improvement). I think you did a splendid job with calming the sound with a more lofi stlye at 00:27. Overall, It's not easy to improve a song with a remix, so great job.

On a creative streak! OH MY GOODNESS!

Being very daring, versatile and always willing to push boundaries is what I love to see in an artist. Even with all that, your style is still consistent and recognizable! You could make even a rough very detailed composition work well aesthetically. We all really look up to that!

You’ve combined abstract splashes of colour with your style IN SUCH A COOL WAY. Seriously. I love this experimental blend. Really opening up artistic ideas! I think this very well visually represents stimulation (especially in this day and age). Very clever how you executed that!